Some people have asked about my fiancee in the story and if that is how she actually is in real life? The answer is YES! She has MAJOR anger difficulties and very often her anger wells up within her for NO apparent reason -- she just starts fuming!
Ok, it's an illness. That is not her fault.But why does she not want their friends to know? Wouldn't it help to have their friends have some understanding about her illness, I mean, if they knew, she could just tell that she feels some rage coming up and thus wants to leave.
Ok, it's an illness. That is not her fault.Yes, it's a chemical imbalance in her brain and it's not her fault but it's still extremely difficult to deal with when she has her eruptions.
But why does she not want their friends to know? Wouldn't it help to have their friends have some understanding about her illness, I mean, if they knew, she could just tell that she feels some rage coming up and thus wants to leave.She doesn't want anyone to know that she is subject to these uncontrollable and often unprovoked outbursts and for the most part, MOST of our friends are unaware of her terrible temper
From time to time, I'll be interjecting situations based on real life events in between my fictional tales and I'll be sure to label which ones are based on real life events that actually happened.
Thank you for commenting 😀
PS: Do the numbered speech balloons help in following the flow of the dialogue?
PS: Do the numbered speech balloons help in following the flow of the dialogue?
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Yes, they remove any doubt about the order :-)
It's quite easy to figure out the order here because the speeches are clear answers to each other but that might not always be the case. Thus I hereby vote to keep the numbering.